Student’s Comments:
What I like:
- “Utah Tree” watercolor.
- The curves of the tree.
- Bold, non-traditional colors.
What could be improved:
- The lower left-hand limb in shadow.
- Rendition of the greenery.
Dan’s Comments:
What I like:
- Interesting use of color, particularly with the yellow sky. Reminds me of the Fauvist artists.
- The composition is tight, intimate, and different.
- I like how you have used layering with the watercolors to create a sense of depth and vibration.
What could be improved:
- The subject doesn’t read that well. I think that comes down to the branches shooting out to the side. They are too big, dark, and dominant. They overpower the main tree trunk.
- The foreground is too light in value compared to the surroundings.
- Your technique and use of color is solid. I think there’s room for improvement in the way you bring it all together and subject selection. This is something you can improve without needing to pick up a brush. Look for interesting subjects throughout your day-to-day life. Get inspiration from nature.
Thanks Tia!