Student’s Comments:
What I like:
I like the striking effects of the rich vibrant blue of the sky complementing with orange colors of the fire and lava and also with the dark brown of the ground.
What could be improved for next time:
Hum… maybe someone can enlighten me with its critics and comments?
Dan’s Comments:
Hi Jacob!
What I like:
- Love the contrast between the rich blue sky and the brilliant lava.
- There’s a pleasing balance between busy and quiet areas (positive and negative space).
- You did a good job at capturing the different objects – lava, steam, rock, and spray.
What could be improved for next time:
- The steam looks a touch too consistent. Some edge variance would work well here.
- The burst of lava looks a touch too organized and neat. Consider a few broken edges and curved lines.
- The black stone works well, but it looks a bit flat. A bit more texture might work well here.